ARC Review: A Fate Forged in Fire by Hazel McBride
Fantasy
A Fate Forged in Fire
Book Info
Released Date: May 27th
Publication: Del Rey
Pages: 416
Format: Paperback
“The hidden dragons and hints of greater powers lurking beneath the surface promise more excitement in future volumes.”
The first installment in this high-fantasy series introduces readers to a richly built world brimming with hidden dragons, deadly trials, and forbidden bloodlines. The author's commitment to deep lore and expansive world-building is impressive—but it comes at a cost. The pacing drags, especially in the first half, weighed down by exposition and detailed descriptions that occasionally sap momentum from the plot.
Our protagonist, a young woman caught between duty and destiny, is intended to be complex but often comes across as frustrating and inconsistent. Her decision-making may test the patience of some readers, and while character flaws can be a strength, here they feel more like a narrative stumbling block.
Romance simmers on the back burner as a subplot, but it’s underdeveloped and lacks emotional payoff. Readers hoping for a compelling romantic arc may feel underwhelmed.
The book shines most in its tension-filled battles and trials, which offer real stakes and thrilling moments. The hidden dragons and hints of greater powers lurking beneath the surface promise more excitement in future volumes.
Overall, this debut sets the stage for an epic saga but may not be for everyone. Those who appreciate slower-burn narratives and intricate world-building may find something to love, but others might wish it moved just a little faster—and had a more likable lead.
